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Brad Daugherty Fan Club
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I have never read a work of fiction with so many uneeded colons in my life. Seriously,there are like 3 colons a page. Sentences like "He had two choices: left or right."
Dude, either use a comma or make it 2 sentences. So stupid.
Also, so many forced references to the original trilogy.